Lady Pearl, you still have a very strong blog with 36 posts but, as we have moved in to the planning stages, many of the excellent aspects of your blogging noted in the previous health check have been used less frequently. Please read through strengths and weaknesses below and complete the to do list at the bottom in order to ensure that your mark returns back into level 4, which is where is should be!
Strengths:
- most tasks complete for planning
weaknesses:
- time management - your frequency of posting to the blog has become more sporadic as you have moved into the planning stages
- consistency in detail - the planning blogs do not reflect the level of detail seen in your early blogging tasks
- use of ICT - again, less use of ICT is evident than in your earlier tasks which is a pity
- care in presentation - black text on black background makes some posts difficult to read
to do / targets:
- improve frequency of posting aiming to post at least 4 times (every other day) weekly
- improve the level of detail in your posts with greater reflection in what you say and detail in your use of ICT (look at your research posts - they are brilliant and set a benchmark of what you are capable of producing)
- use of ICT - as above point!
- change the black font to white (or another lighter colour) so your posts can be read more clearly
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